Tuesday, February 23, 2010

Arson

flick, switch
match strike
bursts of flame
quench
lustful thirsts
her room afire
beneath his passion
though wet
not water
lovers burn
to the ground

17 comments:

Jeney Peney said...

Ohh... I like it. :-)

Bitsy said...

Damn, I thought this was going to be a poem for pyros. Just more sex. :( :)

rel said...

few words,
larger pcture.
in the heat of the moment.
rel

Brian Miller said...

hiss...feel the stream rising...

SUN DANCE HILL said...

Hot visuals - I love the luscious style of your poetry! ;)

Wings said...

Hot stuff!

Bazinga!

Alan Burnett said...

Great piece - "lovers burn ... to the ground". It has such a fine feel to it : like words that were just meant to go together.

Tess Kincaid said...

Hot-hot-hot!!!

She Writes said...

Jeff-You obviously know something about starting a fire ;).

flick, switch
match strike
bursts of flame
quench

Hmmmm. Nice.

Vicki Lane said...

(humming) When your heart's on fire, smoke gets in your eyes . . .

Joan Tucker said...

steam

Lyn said...

This moves to the right conclusion..quite a good accomplishment!!

Tom said...

golly. what's the inspiration for this. Not the Chargers, i hope.

Baino said...

Have you seen Like Water for Chocolate?

The Muse said...

http://adivashammer.com/archives/1124/comment-page-1#comment-8521

union of thought and application
motivation and action...
finality!

C.M. Jackson said...

oh my my ...all that from one match?

steviewren said...

To hot to touch! I feel the heat rising off the page.

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