Tuesday, November 24, 2009

A Mighty Wind

Wind of change, unwanted
With her gale in the wrong direction
Wildflowers, once gently caressed
Wilt away slowly in her soiled hand
Were they not content
Where she found them?

11 comments:

Wings said...

Interesting.

Brian Miller said...

deep stuff today jeff!

Alan Burnett said...

I can think of at least three or four ways to interpret this, which - of course - makes it a good little poem.

Bill G. said...

Oklahoma. 1932.

e said...

Thanks for this, Jeff!

Bitsy said...

Meh.

candy said...

wilt away slowly in her soiled hand


visual...

very nice.

Tess Kincaid said...

Gorgeous. And deeper than it appears.

Vicki Lane said...

"With her gale in the wrong direction..." Intriguing!

Aoife.Troxel said...

Very interesting

PattiKen said...

You must love some of the comments.

For me, the last thought sounds like a focus for a poem, or even a story. Dump the rest.

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