tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post9129421656459457896..comments2023-10-25T10:03:32.395-04:00Comments on Baino's Banter Presents: Irreverent Irrelevance: Waking; WarningUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-2237499548991893602010-07-27T04:36:56.899-04:002010-07-27T04:36:56.899-04:00you've gone from writing about your dreams to ...you've gone from writing about your dreams to writing about dreams...nicely doneTomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10948978798395906663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-63182770110488700682010-07-27T11:18:55.986-04:002010-07-27T11:18:55.986-04:00Great last line. There is something about your rec...Great last line. There is something about your recent foray into combat that is reminding me of Mailer's <i>The Naked and the Dead</i>. Clump them all together into a book, and maybe they'll make a movie out of it.PattiKenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-84040330126815314952010-07-27T12:16:34.186-04:002010-07-27T12:16:34.186-04:00There's the JeffScape twist!There's the JeffScape twist!The Crusty Cronehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330045951877803329noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-81310701629657600832010-07-27T12:48:54.541-04:002010-07-27T12:48:54.541-04:00'No time for games, grace in the playing' ...'No time for games, grace in the playing' ... your entire Magpie is wonderfully written!Helenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-59127191099198818402010-07-27T14:40:01.049-04:002010-07-27T14:40:01.049-04:00"Worn clothes worn, reminders of chores unful..."Worn clothes worn, reminders of chores unfulfilled. One wonders if appearance would be so important in the land of the blind." Whooooo! :)RAhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17922537526607315266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-50783735893379913462010-07-27T15:29:13.579-04:002010-07-27T15:29:13.579-04:00Terrific Magpie!Terrific Magpie!Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-87440410605498390062010-07-27T16:32:33.986-04:002010-07-27T16:32:33.986-04:00very powerful piece - loved it!very powerful piece - loved it!GYPSYWOMANhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03042621041213415958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-55886888194709260432010-07-27T21:41:07.010-04:002010-07-27T21:41:07.010-04:00Now that was a twist I wasn't expecting! Great...Now that was a twist I wasn't expecting! Great piece, Jeff.Tess Kincaidhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-5128364077983414342010-07-28T14:47:14.959-04:002010-07-28T14:47:14.959-04:00It took two reads to link the dialogue lines to th...It took two reads to link the dialogue lines to the 'joke' line. Devious!Stafford Rayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03048757515249725540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-9865267441008237862010-07-29T15:48:58.024-04:002010-07-29T15:48:58.024-04:00Hmm I missed this somehow. "Memories this ear...Hmm I missed this somehow. "Memories this early are never clear, never sure if they're still dreams." a bit how I'm feeling right nowBainohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14156193098088048637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-89056796772007531042010-07-30T16:48:51.737-04:002010-07-30T16:48:51.737-04:00Noooooooo! Not men, Jeff ;). Here I thought you we...Noooooooo! Not men, Jeff ;). <br><br>Here I thought you were remembering something else entirely! But, you had me hook, line and sinker... Of course. I am just that gullible.She Writeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16065870952905767595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-32031741524857838702010-08-07T01:42:51.410-04:002010-08-07T01:42:51.410-04:00This tries too hard for my taste. It just doesn...This tries too hard for my taste. It just doesn't come together for me.Bitsynoreply@blogger.com