tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post8621984224235978326..comments2023-10-25T10:03:32.395-04:00Comments on Baino's Banter Presents: Irreverent Irrelevance: Calm; StayUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-43664564594650161252009-08-18T03:58:18.767-04:002009-08-18T03:58:18.767-04:00Yest another fine piece of writing. You have a gre...Yest another fine piece of writing. You have a great ability to capture the atmosphere of the moment.Alan Burnetthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01015127443616786425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-10271824297071506952009-08-18T05:47:50.155-04:002009-08-18T05:47:50.155-04:00The Buddhist here and now feel to this is so appar...The Buddhist here and now feel to this is so apparent in this piece. That ultimate nature of reality that is so difficult to grasp in the real moment. Nice work. -JayneHarnett-Hargrovehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07486168670308150669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-32006155467540138482009-08-18T08:09:59.759-04:002009-08-18T08:09:59.759-04:00Great little peeks into anxiety, with a few lines ...Great little peeks into anxiety, with a few lines I really like.<br><br>Did it stay 'just' an embrace?Wingshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08045644215235749353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-20935057635634030512009-08-18T20:41:51.708-04:002009-08-18T20:41:51.708-04:00wow. another great piece. you capture the emotion ...wow. another great piece. you capture the emotion of the moment so well...Brian Millerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-77697648912152650902009-08-19T00:19:15.556-04:002009-08-19T00:19:15.556-04:00Did you say you were a military man in a past life...Did you say you were a military man in a past life? You have such imagery that only someone who's been through that could really capture.Bainohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14156193098088048637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-1836648493832617842009-08-19T00:22:13.158-04:002009-08-19T00:22:13.158-04:00Baino: Yes, am a vet. Going back in for a couple o...Baino: Yes, am a vet. Going back in for a couple of years, as well. I get bored easily.JeffScapehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00190641629175438603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-71326603568054169662009-08-19T17:42:30.220-04:002009-08-19T17:42:30.220-04:00This is very good. I would think about moving the...This is very good. I would think about moving the last sentence of paragraph 3 up further in the paragraph. Perhaps before "A safety....". For me, the flow would be better.Bitsynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-55334808955771905322010-07-02T23:57:55.271-04:002010-07-02T23:57:55.271-04:00I haven't seen this before. Just as I suspecte...I haven't seen this before. Just as I suspected.<br><br>"It won't last forever, but solace is taken in the knowledge that it will linger."<br><br>I like this line.She Writeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16065870952905767595noreply@blogger.com