tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post5580027417348020461..comments2023-10-25T10:03:32.395-04:00Comments on Baino's Banter Presents: Irreverent Irrelevance: And They Dance...Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-89495452928633336392010-08-26T01:28:04.701-04:002010-08-26T01:28:04.701-04:00I like how you set this up. Liked the chaos lines....I like how you set this up. Liked the chaos lines. Liked the last paragraph and the last line of the piece. You and those last lines.She Writeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16065870952905767595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-3269566360876389342010-08-26T02:30:51.576-04:002010-08-26T02:30:51.576-04:00Well I don't like the defeatist subtext but I ...Well I don't like the defeatist subtext but I can identify with the characters. Very emotive but also exhilerating.Bainohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14156193098088048637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-33675150207249515472010-08-26T05:38:23.994-04:002010-08-26T05:38:23.994-04:00nicely played jeff...the style you shose to write ...nicely played jeff...the style you shose to write it in plays well with the chaos...the world does keep moving so we might as well dance...even those that cant it seems...smiles.Brian Millerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-22980737239148776482010-08-26T11:57:35.614-04:002010-08-26T11:57:35.614-04:00I'm sensing a shift. Can't quite put my fi...I'm sensing a shift. Can't quite put my finger on it, but I like it. It might be a slightly different tone or perhaps a bit of restraint or tightening (kind of like holding your creative stomach muscles in). Whatever, it's working for me.PattiKenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-78485188916813902010-08-26T21:26:06.271-04:002010-08-26T21:26:06.271-04:00This reminds me of so many things ... swimming in ...This reminds me of so many things ... swimming in chaos, the elaborate dance, parallel lines never connecting. Yea, you and those last lines. You string words together very well! -JHarnett-Hargrovehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07486168670308150669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-2893113214131627602010-08-27T14:40:25.300-04:002010-08-27T14:40:25.300-04:00A very well written piece, a sort of ordered chaos...A very well written piece, a sort of ordered chaos.Leeunahttp://leeunafoster.com/humorblognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-21167801491203102010-08-27T16:58:06.289-04:002010-08-27T16:58:06.289-04:00yeah. what they said.yeah. what they said.Tomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10948978798395906663noreply@blogger.com