tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post4765768984150996927..comments2023-10-25T10:03:32.395-04:00Comments on Baino's Banter Presents: Irreverent Irrelevance: With the Fade of the Tide, Part IIUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-51185941604568365572010-10-22T06:45:26.682-04:002010-10-22T06:45:26.682-04:00smooth indeed, smiles.nice wrinkle you leave us on...smooth indeed, smiles.<br><br>nice wrinkle you leave us on...<br><br>like the little details jeff.Brian Millerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-47575346495050853132010-10-22T17:12:49.459-04:002010-10-22T17:12:49.459-04:00Ah, a little mystery to keep us going.One thing: a...Ah, a little mystery to keep us going.<br><br>One thing: about a third into it, "all-too-disparaging." How about "a little too much disparity"? "Disparaging doesn't seem like the right word.<br><br>Oh, one more thing. Salt water? Owwww...PattiKenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-7434984129864161332010-10-22T20:12:28.124-04:002010-10-22T20:12:28.124-04:00oh those pesky toothpaste caps. nothing wrong with...oh those pesky toothpaste caps. nothing wrong with ocean sex either...Tomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10948978798395906663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-81700108629213288152010-10-23T05:31:17.096-04:002010-10-23T05:31:17.096-04:00Yeah I like all the little details ... and trying ...Yeah I like all the little details ... and trying to work out which are clues and which are blind alleys.<br><br>Three typos, I think.<br>call pull up<br>staring at<br>knees besideJuliehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09513648613788716017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-68203422850704478042010-10-24T16:57:54.185-04:002010-10-24T16:57:54.185-04:00ok, love the moon. going from a neck-stabbing cres...ok, love the moon. going from a neck-stabbing crescent to gibbous to full - great backdrop behind the narrative -- and the action in the salinated tides of le havre.... just.........priceless.Amandahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00942636545948440422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4008433562746910264.post-61208160114595318172010-10-28T10:50:48.729-04:002010-10-28T10:50:48.729-04:00One more correction: "smoothly" should...One more correction: "smoothly" should be "smooth". The sentence is not about how her vagina registers sensation, correct? It's about how her vagina feels to him as he screws her in the ocean water. Which would be smooth.Marchelinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11201825708442679157noreply@blogger.com